I am so lost.Whenever you are not here,
Lost in your thoughts.
Lost in your elegance.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at you.
Lost in your charm.
Lost in your panache.
I am so lost.
Whenever I'm talking with you,
Lost in your words.
Lost in your sweet voice.
I am so lost.
Whenever you are with me,
Lost in your fragrance.
Lost in your charishma.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at your eyes,
Lost in your grace.
Lost in your mesmerism.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at your face,
Lost in your smile.
Lost in your expressions.
I am so lost.
Whenever I am holding you in my arms,
Lost in time.
Lost in You.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
I am so lost.
Whenever we are kissing each other,
Lost in its sweetness.
Lost in its continuity.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
I really enjoy this world,
Spinning all around me.
I am so lost.
I am so in love...
Dedicated to My Luv!
P.S.-Using the pink color, 'coz you look stunning in it!
Lost in your thoughts.
Lost in your elegance.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at you.
Lost in your charm.
Lost in your panache.
I am so lost.
Whenever I'm talking with you,
Lost in your words.
Lost in your sweet voice.
I am so lost.
Whenever you are with me,
Lost in your fragrance.
Lost in your charishma.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at your eyes,
Lost in your grace.
Lost in your mesmerism.
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at your face,
Lost in your smile.
Lost in your expressions.
I am so lost.
Whenever I am holding you in my arms,
Lost in time.
Lost in You.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
I am so lost.
Whenever we are kissing each other,
Lost in its sweetness.
Lost in its continuity.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
I really enjoy this world,
Spinning all around me.
I am so lost.
I am so in love...
Dedicated to My Luv!
P.S.-Using the pink color, 'coz you look stunning in it!
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6 comments:
It was a mesmerizin thot...every lil detail tht uve mentioned here...has a unique essence to go wid...cant tell u how spell-bindin it was...i mean its soo very intricately presented...n u kno wat ths particular feature of the thot here makes it so awesome to make a reader astounded whn its dun...cz one wud neva want such a pure emotion to lose its fludity as tym progresses...and i din want it to end...i was pretty shocked to kno tht it wasnt long enuf to suffice my soul...
I am so lost.
Whenever I look at your face,
Lost in your smile.
Lost in your expressions.
Love doesnt require da aid of ne wrds to express itself...and the way uve put frth the fact tht u lukin into each others eyes is jst enuf to let each other kno how and wat u r goin thru at tht instance...trust me its one of the best stanzas here...
I am so lost.
Whenever I am holding you in my arms,
Lost in time.
Lost in You.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
Ths stanza expresses everythin...the charm..the trust..the exuberance..and the invigoratin touch which manages its best to drive all the joy into ur soul::every moment...i love the way uve written the lines...its so simple and yet so unique...its perhaps the most eye catchin lines uve penned down here...its absolutely a sublime thot...and trust me the truth tht sparks thru ur existence fr her jst speaks its heart out here...n m so honored to cum across sumthin as eternal as ths...
I am so lost.
Whenever we are kissing each other,
Lost in its sweetness.
Lost in its continuity.
Don't wanna let you go,
Don't wanna lose you ever.
Im astounded...da thot out here is simply awe-inspirin...u kno wat the fact tht ur simple expression speaks louder thn wat ur wrds can do is a splendid sight to watch...n trust me pritz out here the security, concern n love uve laid out fr her is simply beyond ne wrds to describe...cz feelins of ths sort can neva b illustrated in wrds...the unfathomable bliss tht one cums acrss while readin ths stanza of urs is exceptionally magical...n i love it to the core...
nd yea nt to frgt the way uve ended the poem is damn appealin...n i wish i cud nt let it eva reach n end...cz its soo mindblowin a poem tht it deserves to go on till eternity...tho u i kno ur hands wud b defrmed if ud hv to go on writin endlessly...[:P]...bt yea neway...i kno the way uve translated ur passion fr love is clearly visible here...n i hate u fr puttin a stop to it...cz id neva want tht to occur to poems which take away the readers fr a ride into xtasy...[:)][:D]
awesome poem...gr8 wrk...keep it up...u rock...so keep writin...[>:D<]
Beautiful poem....simple and elegant...I like the direct nature of it...you don't use too many words to express what you feel....shows that you have a pure and clear heart....good work...keep writing
Lovely.
Lovely.
Oh, later I realized that Neha also commented exactly same. It was not copied :-) Great poem!!!
Beautiful! Got here, via ImpsMom's tweet :)
You do write from the heart!
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